I am a learner at Glen Taylor School in Auckland, New Zealand. I am in Room 6 and my teacher is Mr Sok.
Hey Sargent,I like your story Mutated Zomie and how you describe him. And using exciting words you enter in your story.Great work!you
Hi Sargent I really enjoyed the use of dialogue in your story - it helps make it interesting for your reader. I'd love to know what happened to the zombie in the end.
Hey Sargent,
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Great work!
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Hi Sargent I really enjoyed the use of dialogue in your story - it helps make it interesting for your reader. I'd love to know what happened to the zombie in the end.
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